Wednesday 30 September 2009

The parable of the old man and the young

So Abram rose, and clave the wood, and went,
And took the fire with him, and a knife.
And as they sojourned both of them together,
Isaac the first-born spake and said, My Father,
Behold the preparations, fire and iron,
But where the lamb for this burnt-offering?
Then Abram bound the youth with belts and straps,
And builded parapets and trenches there,
And stretchèd forth the knife to slay his son.
When lo! an Angel called him out of heaven,
Saying, Lay not thy hand upon the lad,
Neither do anything to him, thy son.
Behold! Caught in a thicket by its horns,
A Ram. Offer the Ram of Pride instead.

But the old man would not so, but slew his son,
And half the seed of Europe, one by one.

6 comments:

  1. This is a difficult one. If you are able to access a bible, look at Genesis chapter 22. What is the difference between the way that Abram (ie Abraham the patriarch behaved towards his son in the bible, and the way that the 'Abram' of Owen's poem behaves towards his son?

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  2. Notice how in the bible, abraham doesn't kill his son, whereas in Wilfred Owen's poem, he does. you could think of Abram as the generals, and Isaac the soldiers that they sent to their demise. it even says how Abram 'bound the youth with belts and straps, and builded parapets and trenches there' and he then went on to 'slay his son'

    Aterlee

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  3. This poem is written loosely in Iambic Pentameter and does not follow a rhyme scheme. The poem is held together by other means to such as Alliteration.

    Nathan

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  4. This poem is written by the poet 'Wilfren Owen'. The poem is written in two stanza's and the first one is much longer than the second one, which only has two lines. This clearly shows the differentce between this poems ending and the genesis chapter 22 in the bible.
    Abram in the bible does as the angel says and does not hurt his son however in the poem Abram doesnt do as the angels say. Throughout the poem the story is the same as the bible until the last two lines when the poem splits into two stanza's and abram behaves differently, 'But the old man would not do so'. Even though he is told not to in the poem by the angel's he still went ahead and 'slew his son'.

    Felicity !

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  5. This poem makes a real impact as this story from the Bible is a well known one, and was even more so at the time it was written. This allows the reader to follow the story and and the end when the sudden twist is read, to reflect back over the poem and fully comprehend the subtle mentioning of parapets and trenches. The representation of the destruction and wreckage of lives caused by the war is simple but disturbing especially when you look at the date Wilfred Owen died and you realise he died in the war himself.

    Alix

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  6. The Parable of the Old Man and the Young

    The story of this poem is loosely based on the bible story of Abraham in Genesis. Wilfred Owen uses the language of the King James 1 bible, which was published in 1611 so the language is therefore very old fashioned and uses words such as "clave" and "builded".

    By basing his poem around a well known bible story,Owen's poem and its message would be remembered as all the population of WW1 Britain would have known it. there are many subtle messages hidden behind the lines of this poem that become clear at the very end, when the poem leaves its bible story and becomes a thing of its own.

    "Belts and straps". In the poem this is what Abram binds his son Isaac with when he prepares to sacrifice him. However in the bible he uses rope. The use of belts and straps signifies an army uniform and warfare language. "Builded parapets and trenches" is also a sign that this poem is different to the Biblical story as Abraham bulids an altar when he prepares to sacrifice his son.

    Alexia

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