Wednesday 30 September 2009

Spring In War-Time

Now the sprinkled blackthorn snow
Lies along the lovers’ lane
Where last year we used to go—
Where we shall not go again.

In the hedge the buds are new,
By our wood the violets peer—
Just like last year’s violets, too,
But they have no scent this year.

Every bird has heart to sing
Of its nest, warmed by its breast;
We had heart to sing last spring,
But we never built our nest.

Presently red roses blown
Will make all the garden gay . . .
Not yet have the daisies grown
On your clay.

8 comments:

  1. This poem relates the season of spring to a lover's feelings after her partner dies. Nesbit describes pleasant subjects in the first 3 lines of each verse, then continues to state negative or solemn facts. This makes the reader feel sympathy towards the writer, one understands Nesbit's feelings towards her situation, seeing the spring antics around her, and identifying their relationship to herself and her partners lives together.
    EVELYN

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    EVELYN

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  3. The rhyming pattern demonstrated in this poem is ABAB (alternate rhyming). This was probably used to give the poem an obvious rhythm.
    SIAN, Tori, Rachel and EVELYN

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  4. This poem has quite a simple rhyming pattern (A, B, A, B) and there are seven syllables in each line with the exception of the final line which only has three. However, only having three syllables gives it a short and effective ending and it could also imply that the news of the death was quite sudden and unexpected to Edith Nesbit. The writer has lost her lover, we can tell this from the whole of the first stanza particularly the last two lines. Nesbit sometimes uses enjambment to create a continuous effect. In the rest of the poem she talks about the thing that they used to do and see together however, it is not the same anymore through her eyes she can see the violets but cannot smell the scent, it is like now that he is dead everything in he life has collapsed and died. Natures beauty continues but her meaningful appreciation for it has died.

    ABI, KATE, TASH BLACK, HOLLY + KATIE SADDLER. (:

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  5. Spring in War Time has alternate rhyming and is structured in the ABAB style.
    Each verse has a sad last line which contrasts to the other three lines. This gives the reader the impression that the person who this is about - whether Nesbit talking about her partner, or just talking in general - was very happy in her life until her parnter dies which relates to the three happy lines, one sad line structure. Nesbit also uses enjambement throughout the poem.
    Rachel :)

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  6. Who does the narrator address?

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