Wednesday 30 September 2009

Spring Offensive

Halted against the shade of a last hill,
They fed, and lying easy, were at ease
And, finding comfortable chests and knees,
Carelessly slept. But many there stood still
To face the stark blank sky beyond the ridge,
Knowing their feet had come to the end of the world.

Marvelling they stood, and watched the long grass swirled
By the May breeze, murmurous with wasp and midge,
For though the summer oozed into their veins
Like an injected drug for their bodies' pains,
Sharp on their souls hung the imminent line of grass,
Fearfully flashed the sky's mysterious glass.

Hour after hour they ponder the warm field, -
And the far valley behind, where the buttercup
Had blessed with gold their slow boots coming up,
Where even the little brambles would not yield
But clutched and clung to them like sorrowing hands.
[ ] they breathe like trees unstirred.

Till like a cold gust thrills the little word
At which each body and its soul begird
And tighten them for battle. No alarms
Of bugles, no high flags, no clamorous haste, -
Only a lift and flare of eyes that faced
The sun, like a friend with whom their love is done.
O larger shone that smile against the sun, -
Mightier than his whose bounty these have spurned.

So, soon they topped the hill, and raced together
Over an open stretch of herb and heather
Exposed. And instantly the whole sky burned
With fury against them; earth set sudden cups
In thousands for their blood; and the green slope
Chasmed and steepened sheer to infinite space.

Of them who running on that last high place
Leapt to swift unseen bullets, or went up
On the hot blast and fury of hell's upsurge,
Or plunged and fell away past this world's verge,
Some say God caught them even before they fell.

But what say such as from existence' brink
Ventured but drave too swift to sink,
The few who rushed in the body to enter hell,
And there out-fiending all its fiends and flames
With superhuman inhumanities,
Long-famous glories, immemorial shames -
And crawling slowly back, have by degrees
Regained cool peaceful air in wonder -
Why speak not they of comrades that went under?

4 comments:

  1. The writer, Wilfred Owen, chose a random style rhyming pattern for this poem as it reads more like a story. There are seven stanzas which use emjambement to lengthen the line and fit with the syllable pattern.
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  2. I thought the poem spoke about the war in the spring time. It's about something terrible happening in an idyllic atmosphere which contrasts from the actions that are happening. Wilfred Owen uses adjectives to set the scene. For Example, "Stark blank sky" which gives the reader a harsh image to build effect.
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  3. I think the poem is describing the soldiers on the front line preparing to fight. "Each body and it's soul begrid and tighten" shows that the men are feeling tense and frightened. The word "imminent"suggests that something is on the verge of happening which makes the reader also feel the tension.
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  4. The poem uses similes for effect. For instance when Wilfred Owen says "The summer oozed into their veins like an injected drug." This shows that the summer is bringing hope to the men and filling their bodies with happiness for a brief moment before they face the realization of war.
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